New YouTube Poop

[CoolSponge25]

Hi guys! Check out this YouTube Poop! It's my first YouTube Poop, using the Spongebob You're Fired episode.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRengAztiYk

I hope you'll like it!​

 

[ThePineappleLord]

Too much editing, not enough jokes.

 

[Doctor 6ex]

I thought that was pretty funny

 

[Vuvuzela Smasher]

Wooooooah that was cool

 

[hfjs]

That was an eye/earful, now.

 

[President Squidward]

Eh...

- too much editing, you gotta add some actual jokes in there :P
- using older memes (not a problem, but it can get annoying, such as the part when "You Spin Me Right Around" was playing, it's not funny anymore. Also, wtf was with scenes of the Super Mario Super Show,etc. in the background at parts of the poop?)
- too much explosions (that one in Dying for pie gets annoying as seeing many poops doing it)
- the title card beginning was a bit too long

I can understand the first poop isn't the best, you still tried and next time you can try harder. :)

 

[tEMMIE]

...You know throwing all the editing you can at the screen doesn't make it good, right?

 

[President Squidward]

...You know throwing all the editing you can at the screen doesn't make it good, right?

Well, Geibuchan kinda does that but still puts jokes in his poops.